The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road.
In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain the condition of the road
• and suggest what they should do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the negligence in the task of repairing the road by the municipal authority workers. I am very dissatisfied with the inefficiency of your workers.
My name is Prabhpreet Kaur working as a Senior Manager in HSBC Bank and a resident of New Friends Colony residing in House Number 27 for the past 13 years.
Last month, due to heavy rains the road in the front of my house was damaged. There is a big pothole in the middle of the road. During rains the pothole is filled with water making it difficult for driving cars. Moreover, many children have got hurt while riding bicycle and also water logging becomes the home of mosquitoes and other insects thus causing many diseases
I would suggest you to take necessary and immediate actions and send a team of efficient workers for repairing the damaged road as soon as possible so that not only there are no casualties but also people do not suffer from any health issues. Furthermore, kindly hire professional and effective workers who perform their duties and tasks on schedule.
I hope you will take prompt action
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Suggestion:
...other insects thus causing many diseases I would suggest you to take necessary an...
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...le. I hope you will take prompt action Looking forward to hearing from you soon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53088463223 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685990338164 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.511033883 44.8134815571 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203915007582 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773332323814 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835819881707 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736693695591 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914500917097 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.