You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter
• describe the problems
• explain how they are affecting people
• say what the company should do to help
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the internet services provided by your company in our area. The disruptive internet connection is causing a great problem and I hope you will take necessary actions to resolve it as soon as possible.
Before installing the router and internet connection from your company, the service provider assured us that uninterrupted services will be provided. However, this does not seem the case. As for the last couple of days we are experiencing extremely slow internet connectivity and sometimes it becomes unreachable especially during peak hours.
Since most of the people in our locality including me, work from home where we have to complete the projects and submit to the customers within the deadline. Weak internet connections make it impossible to complete the task on time and this affects the professional work as well as the profession. Furthermore, people are not able to do online shopping and video conferencing.
I would suggest you to kindly send someone and have the problem fixed as soon as possible. If required, kindly install new cables in the locality which will help to provide strong internet connectivity to the society.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration and will have this issue resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97053430784 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6959896819 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239893032365 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813500411434 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629634278161 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123998548418 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760306195831 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.