In some countries, it is advisable that a child should start formal education at 4 years. However, in some countries children start their school when they are 7 or 8 years of age.
In some countries it is acceptable that children can start their studies at age of 5. while in other countries children are allow to study if they are above 8 year old. However, In this essay I will discuss about how it is important to start studying in the age of 5 rather then 8 before reaching to an appropriate conclusion.
In one hand, Children mind is very adapted in the age of 5 teacher and parents can put alot of things in their mind easily because children can learn things easily when the did not have other work to do so this can give them some advantage to learn fast and easily Moreover, Children under age are more adaptable to ther environment rather than students who are above 10.
On the other hand, Children can easily interact with other people without any hesitation because it is easy for them at the age of 5 because children above 8 sometime feel shy to ask questions from their teacher and this thing will lead to ruin their future in many ways people can think that children learn fast at the age of 5 rather than the age of 8. For example, A university of Ohio said that 90 percent student learn quickly in the age of 5.
In conclusion, Children can learn more language and things at very less age after they have to suffer alot to learn new things from their teacher so children should have to start studying at age of 5 not from 8 this can help them to develop their mind and learn new things easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...en can start their studies at age of 5. while in other countries children are allow t...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
.... while in other countries children are allow to study if they are above 8 year old. ...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...e in other countries children are allow to study if they are above 8 year old. However, ...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...o start studying in the age of 5 rather then 8 before reaching to an appropriate con...
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Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...s can give them some advantage to learn fast and easily Moreover, Children under age...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...ys people can think that children learn fast at the age of 5 rather than the age of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33457249071 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25821055973 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460966542751 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.364302598 44.8134815571 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.571428571 76.5299724578 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 4.34317383033 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263224737203 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163139393853 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122833937195 0.0603063233224 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183290115625 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954737944528 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.43 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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