Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Many people do not care about the environmental issues because they did not take care of the environment properly and did not know the real value of environment. In this essay i will discuss about how people should have to take care of the nature properly with some restrictions before reaching to the conclusion.
In one hand, Environment is very important for all the leaving beings including animals and humans because nature give us food to eat and oxygen to breath without any expenses. People should have to take care of the natural resources because nature provide us manu useful things. Which can help people to grow in different kinds of field.For example, Petrol prices are very high because petrol is a very expensive substance so one can make themselves good living.
On the other hand, Nature provide us oxygen free without oxygen one cannot leave for a second. Oxygen is very important for every human being. People should have to plant to more trees to help environment grow more and stop the pollution from increasing in many different types of ways.
In conclusion, Environment is most important factor for every people and animals because people will not survive alone without the help of environment people should have to clean environment to get a good satisfied life with all living beings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94570135747 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52277762658 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511312217195 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9135109844 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150143819419 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674896906461 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916139294195 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103239832874 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978608834025 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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