Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.
Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
As world’s population is increasing day by day, countries official tell their citizens that what should be their family size?. It is crucial and jurisdictive for them to seek through this situation and apply some strict rules for birth. What’s my notion? Well, I am in between neither or nor for this consent.
Firstly, with every new people adding in the national list, it will burden the financial drawers of national income. For example; food, education, clothes, shelter or any necessity of life have to be provided by them, in addition, increasing numbers may increase inflation that must be solve by great officials ultimately, every cost is add up and a handsome amount has to look by. To illustrate this, parents having two children can give them better life as the couple having 6 or more children. Furthermore, climate change in terms of global warming comes with this as vehicles used by any means for persons generate heat that warm up the weather and so many things like crop production is disturbed. Secondly, more job seekers rise with increase in population, government has to generate Jobs and salaries for them. As the world is facing economic crisis, difficulties getting new jobs arouse. So, what if the humans don’t have anything to earn and go through their expenses, a stressful environment with depressed people create that would lead to poor performances of all individuals.
On the other hand, this should be a couple decision whether they want a big family or not, I mean they should know where to fulfil all the requirements of their family.
To sum up, while government have rights to deals with any ramification that comes up with overpopulation like generate employment or giving food etc. But they should consider the emotions of their certain citizens that want to have a big families, if they are willing to overcome burden of their government than they has to pay taxes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
...y notion? Well, I am in between neither or nor for this consent. Firstly, with ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave to be provided by them, in addition, increasing numbers may increase inflatio...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: added
...eat officials ultimately, every cost is add up and a handsome amount has to look by...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'family'?
Suggestion: family
...ertain citizens that want to have a big families, if they are willing to overcome burden...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...me burden of their government than they has to pay taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, i mean, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 322.0 206.0 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67223889129 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 127.690721649 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614906832298 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1952160376 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 4.34317383033 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231253073752 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071535668743 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524712691994 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134542516559 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280878878637 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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