News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.
Some people believe that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
A picture is worth a thousand words (Fred R.Barnard). In this world of globalization, every new revelation on Television and newspapers commonly go with portrayal. More than a few peeps think that the photographs and drawings are effectual than vocable. In this essay, I’ll give my perspective.
To start with, it is a given fact that human brain is more attractive towards pictures as comparing with sounds and words. If the news consists of handsome amounts of visual than the humans are more engage to that particular article rather than the one who is solely comprised of words. For instance, there was an earthquake in 2005, Pakistan. Reporters and newscaster were talking about this ramification and the after effects which affect the all provinces. But we couldn’t understand or estimate, how much destruction would have happened by this disaster unless we saw the images of various fall of building and cracks on roads. Seeing this, people urge to do help the victims of earthquake physically, financially or get the trapped people from debris.
Secondly, these helped us to remember certain people, events and occasions or even some products that are displayed on screen for marketing. For example, who know there prime minister face if they haven’t seen his pictures. Furthermore, newspapers have plethora of advertisements of various products or holiday destinations that leave their impression on customers so that, sales will rise. If they just put written details than no one seems interested in their object.
In conclusion, the pictures, sketches or portraits have great possessions on people mind and encourage them to remember events, buying products, help some on who need them or even go for a place there they haven’t went before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Barnard
...icture is worth a thousand words Fred R.Barnard. In this world of globalization, every ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...res as comparing with sounds and words. If the news consists of handsome amounts o...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...acks on roads. Seeing this, people urge to do help the victims of earthquake physical...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... on customers so that, sales will rise. If they just put written details than no o...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: HASNT_IRREGULAR_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'haven’t gone', 'haven’t wended', 'haven’t went'?
Suggestion: haven’t gone; haven’t wended; haven’t went
... them or even go for a place there they haven’t went before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22887323944 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83827061838 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665492957746 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1504403437 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210179525326 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595632929104 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040716231482 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110366030621 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642574207971 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.