Someone has returned your bag with all its belongings that you recently lost. Write a letter to thank that person.
In the letter, you should:
thank him/her
describe how you left your bag
explain why its belongings were important to you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you for returning my lost bag.
I have travelled from New Delhi to Chandigarh last week by train. I was too tired and fall asleep halfway. Finally, when I disembarked from the train, I had forgotten to pick my bag. But it was too late to get inside again.
I tried to reach out railway office but they had no information about this. I was really tensed as my bag had some of my important belongings such as confidential business documents, car keys, passport and driving license. I am lucky that the bag went into right hands, otherwise, It would have been a troublesome situation for me. It would be my pleasure to pay the shipping cost you have borne to deliver it to me.
Once again, thank you so much for this kind gesture.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Delhi to Chandigarh last week by train. I was too tired and fall asleep halfway. ...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...car keys, passport and driving license. I am lucky that the bag went into right h...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, really, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54248366013 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55174983665 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699346405229 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.48565747 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168046613863 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558527540823 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645294807578 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116508704119 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078445692374 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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