Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight Write a letter to the airport s customer service department In your letter include what delayed you how missing this flight affected you what you would like the airport to do about this i

Essay topics:

Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight.
Write a letter to the airport's customer service department. In your letter include:
• what delayed you
• how missing this flight affected you
• what you would like the airport to do about this issue

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring to your kind notice about the inconvenience that I suffered today because of airport security. I was supposed to board the flight number AI-347 from New Delhi to Canada on January 10, 2019, which I could not catch. I reached the boarding gate on time after clearing all the security points but to my surprise, all of a sudden your team came and took me for some interrogation which was completely irrelevant of me. By the time, they completed their duty, my flight already took off.

I was travelling as I had a scheduled important meeting to attend which of course, I cannot attend now all because of your team. However, the damage is already done now. I already informed my employer about all this situation and they asked me to take the next flight and reach the said destination as soon as possible.

I would like you to rectify this unexpected investigation and book my next flight without imposing any new ticket prices on me for the next meeting. Also, kindly incur all the necessary charges like food and accommodation.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Nisha Bhan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring to you...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uary 10, 2019, which I could not catch. I reached the boarding gate on time after...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their duty, my flight already took off. I was travelling as I had a scheduled im...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e said destination as soon as possible. I would like you to rectify this unexpec...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry charges like food and accommodation. Looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nisha Bhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6148804944 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7178118112 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169540783846 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621097327569 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531768151422 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108402041937 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416714227714 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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