You are going away to travel for the summer.
A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house\
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Dear Ben,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Hope you are in the pink of your health. I was so excited to hear that you are coming to my
place for your summer vacations but I am sorry to </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">inform</span> that I <span class="hiddengrammarerror">will not be</span> able to attend you
at my home.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">To </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">elucidate</span>, I have to close the deal on which I was working from the past six months and cannot let it go. I have taken care of all the necessary things that you will need during the stay. In case, if you <span class="hiddensuggestion">require</span> anything do let me know, I will arrange it. My house is very
small with a kitchen on the right of the entrance and living on the left. My bedroom is upstairs just in front of the staircase and next to it is a guest room that you can use. There is a small lawn where you can sit and enjoy a cup of coffee.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">The only thing I would like you to do is to put the dustbins out on every night and they </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">are collected</span> every morning. Also, if you could water the plants every second day in the evening would be a great help. I will give you a call before I leave for the trip and will try to come back soon.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Cheers, </span><span style="font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 14.5pt;">Dennis</span></p>
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- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.In your letter1.Describe the work you have been do 84
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 87
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...background-clip: initial;'>Dear Ben,
Line 4, column 1324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...; background-clip: initial;'>Cheers, ^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2878.0 937.175257732 307% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 345.0 206.0 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.34202898551 4.54256449028 184% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.23770767673 2.54303337028 324% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 290.88556701 259% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 298.159456882 44.8134815571 665% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.777777778 76.5299724578 418% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055015488904 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051462967589 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232919263575 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566206586912 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294749360185 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 8.37731958763 442% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.85 70.7449484536 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 3.82989690722 475% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 7.45979381443 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 31.68 8.71597938144 363% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 39.5 8.62886597938 458% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.