Sylvia:
You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account.You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear sir,
I am writing in regards to a notice I received from your bank about the overdraft on my current account (0123987). I have operated this account for about four years.
However, I will like to call your attention to the fact that according to my books, I should have a credit balance of about $245. Eight months ago, I instructed the bank to initiate a standing order to Heritage Home's account for my mortgage payment for six consecutive months (September to February).This order should have been terminated two months ago accordingly. I was nonetheless unpleasantly surprised when I received my bank statement including a letter that my account has been overdrawn, revealing that the standing order is yet to be cancelled. This implies that $480 has been paid in excess of the mortgage payments.
Since this mistake is from the bank, I kindly request that the last two transactions ($240 each) be reversed and that the standing order should be immediately stopped. I would also ask that no charges should be deducted from my account. In addition, I would appreciate it if a copy of my bank statement can be mailed to me after the necessary reconciliation has been carried out.
Thank you for your anticipated cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Sylvia Akinjare
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear sir, I am writing in regards to a notice I received from your bank abou...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...unt for about four years. However, I will like to call your attention to the fact...
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Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...onsecutive months September to February.This order should have been terminated two m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, nonetheless, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96244131455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90565197069 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3316907313 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35393356877 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134523111086 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612692286493 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21686858333 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372313587562 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.