The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council:
-describe how rubbish collection system is not working properly.
- explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours.
- Suggest what should be done about this problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my annoyance with the garbage collection system in the 5th area. The rubbish has not orderly been collecting for a week and this situation causes too many problems in our area.
The garbage truck has not been coming daily to the street for two weeks, sometimes it could visit here every other day. The containers, which are located near the children's park, smell hardly stench and have too many insects around them. This causes serious environmental and, visual pollution, also health problems. That is why we cannot leave our children to the playground because the houseflies can be very dangerous for them.
It might be very useful if you can increase the service capacity and working hours. our suggestion is that you could send the rubbish truck two times per day this would be the solution to all problems.
Kindly regards,
Damo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my annoyance wit...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es it could visit here every other day. The containers, which are located near the ...
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Line 11, column 180, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'smell'.
Suggestion: hardly smell
...ch are located near the childrens park, smell hardly stench and have too many insects around...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seflies can be very dangerous for them. It might be very useful if you can incre...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...the service capacity and working hours. our suggestion is that you could send the r...
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Line 15, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would be the solution to all problems. Kindly regards, Damo
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to all problems. Kindly regards, Damo
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problems. Kindly regards, Damo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00662251656 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37706834724 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701986754967 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8605813907 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231806261941 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827299227958 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766333530626 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169044848915 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105873787764 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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