You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share my feedback about our company's all-day meeting which took place in your hotel. First of all, I want to thank you for hosting us well on Saturday 11th September.
All participants liked the rooms' view and the serving staff but everyone had a problem with the portion of food and they complained that the served food was not fresh. Your staff was really cheerful and fast in this way the participants did not have to wait many times for the food that they ordered. However, some of our employees had stomachache during the meeting and we allow them to go to the hospital.
we learned that one of them cannot be work for a week because he had food poisoning.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to serve fresh food to the customers for their health and your impression.
Please take my best regards,
Damo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing us well on Saturday 11th September. All participants liked the rooms view an...
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...nd we allow them to go to the hospital. we learned that one of them cannot be wo...
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...r a week because he had food poisoning. Perhaps it would be a good idea to serve...
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...sion. Please take my best regards, Damo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, really, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62580645161 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33762154887 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6603924556 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351263081765 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123262276303 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829602820697 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147294359998 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107505034551 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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