The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I am Harsha Vardhan, residing in Harris colony of Jayanagar. I am writing this letter on behalf of society members in our colony to express our dissatisfaction with the way garbage is being collected and organized.
Firstly, in our corporation cleaning workers should come thrice in a week to collect the waste. But mostly they come only once and often start working in the afternoon. Hence most of the employees are unable to throw their garbage and it is been piled up for days together in their homes.
Secondly, the common garbage collection area is not maintained with dry and wet dustbins to segregate the waste and the present one is insufficient. So, we left with no option to throw all our waste in one dustbin and causing the awful smell.
To avoid these, we suggest you take necessary action on garbage collection workers and make them come regularly and on time. In addition to that, kindly arrange the separate dry and wet dustbins at the corner of our colony to avoid the smell.
I hope you consider our request and take the necessary actions to improve the process.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha Vardhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d often start working in the afternoon. Hence most of the employees are unable to thr...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92820512821 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55922613221 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7337656088 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149022244117 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531319532418 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434224830659 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634818288069 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253912110813 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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