The table below shows the results of a 20 year-study into why adults in the Uk attend arts events.
The given table gives information about the percentage of the reason for adults in the Uk participating in art events from 20 years ago to nowadays.
Overall, the main reason is that the Uk citizens attend many art events about 20 years to today that desire to see specific performers or artists. Whereas, the less popular reason makes the UKers taking part in the artistry event for working and business.
In terms of the most common reason why the people in England go to the arts with the aim that desire to see specific performers or artists has made a slight difference in the past 20 years. The data of this reason in 20 years ago, 10 years ago and the present is 58%, 55%, 56% respectively. While the figure of the reason is the special occasion or celebration that followed by desiring to see specific artists or performers. The proportion of this reason has dramatically changed, in 20 years ago and 10 years ago that the percentage of attending the art events as special occasions and celebrations had a insignificant change about 7%. But now it decreases at 9% that has a bigger dip than the past .
With regard to accompanying children to the arts with the adults in the UK increases each 20 years ago. 20 years ago it accounted for 9%. Whilst in 10 year ago it grew up to 15% . But the present it goes up sharply at around 24% - this rises at about nearly 10% than 10 years ago and at about 15% than 20 years ago. Meanwhile the least popular reason to attend the virtuosity appearance changed at about 6% to 10% between 20 years ago and 10 years ago. Today it has increased at about 1% than 10 years ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 297.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46801346801 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53831746548 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4374992251 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251464406766 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114389145237 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854395008661 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200523936932 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051108918688 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.