There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council.
In your letter
give reasons why you are against the plans
explain why the parkland should stay
suggest what action the council should take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to oppose the plans of constructing a new factory in central park. I am a resident of that area and I frequently visit the park. Building a factory there will adversely effect the residents as well as other species who depend on the park.
Let me explain in detail. Being the only park in the town, it is not only frequented my people of age group but also home to a number of migratory birds. Additionally, the park has many trees, some of which are over 100 years old. Destroying the park means cutting down all the tress and consequently driving away the birds and other animals. Despite the fact that the factory will definitely provide employment opportunities to many, it will come at a cost replacing the last open space in town.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you could present this argument in the next council meeting and use your power to halt the construction of the factory. Furthermore, a copy of this letter has been sent to the newspaper in order to raise awareness about the issue.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...Building a factory there will adversely effect the residents as well as other species ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61103427783 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7851446142 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132821491581 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438446336949 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474965658517 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788739107176 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390654369952 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.