There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved Write a letter to your manager In your letter describe the complaints that hav

Hi Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the complaints I received about the reception cabin near the main entrance for a few months.
We are aware our company is the place much business, customer and users visiting quite frequently. They fell very dissatisfied with the reception area. As this place is always overcrowded and there are no facilities to sit neither sofa nor chairs. The receptionist is not unable to handle the quires from many people or sometimes she is not available at her desk. There is confusion regarding the form filling and submission.
Many stakeholders visiting our company if this place is not spacious then chances may lose the projects further. So, could you please look into this matter and check the possibility of solutions on how to improve our reception area to impress our customers.
I am hoping that you would look into this matter and do the needful. I look forward to hearing from you for further notice. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.

Yours faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Sir, I am writing this letter regarding the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94797687861 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68365012895 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8212649912 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202821457412 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693512317393 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695364414047 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103892811184 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387714910574 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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