Daily exercise always keeps our bodies active and healthy. people who staying in cities are not focusing on this because of various reasons. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the obstacles they are facing along with some feasible solutions.
There are several reasons why city people unable to concentrate on physical education firstly, place constraints because of overpopulation in cities there is no free space to build parks or playgrounds. Last year I saw in one of the newspapers a certain city passing rule to demolish the parks and constructing the apartments. Secondly, time constraints people are busy in their carrier to earn money as the living lifestyle in cities are very expensive. In cities, people are spending most of their time in traveling to reach their destination as well.
According to me either Government or local communities, need to take initiation to run health-related campaigns’. The government should allocate enough space to construct parks, playgrounds in the cities. Furthermore, companies can establish gyms in office buildings and encourage people to do workouts. They can add the policy of either daily or weekly workers need to do any exercise such as aerobics, yoga, Zumba for at least 30 mins before start working. Apartments need to plan facilities like swimming pool, indoor or outdoor courts can help the people who ever staying in those apartments.
Health is wealth, I want to conclude that physical fitness is important for every individual, people need to understand the benefits and need to facilitate by themself to do daily work outs which may results for them to stay healthier in the society. They can be the best example for other citizens as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10676156584 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85095362577 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1522337773 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16193279622 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508512362446 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331322526318 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906454096263 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277946456603 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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