Some people believe that it is better for governments to spend money on dealing with the causes of crime. Some others believe they should spend money on punishing criminals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Government passes many rules to reduce crime in society. One of them is they spend money on preparing experts to find the reasons for crime. The other one is they invest money in punishing the offenders. Some people think the first one is effective and some others think the second method is more effective. According to me, the Government should allocate more money for punishments.
Current Government allocating many special crime branches for different kinds of crimes. For example, robbers, police station level Sub-inspector will handle. Murder cases will be handle by the central bureau's investigation team will handle. This way the Government distributes the money and find the root cause of all these crimes. By knowing the purpose of the mystery according to me nobody able to stop the crime. This can happen anywhere in any home for many reasons. It is impossible that Government go to each and every house and see the situation in their house for finding chances of crime.
If govt gives crucial punishments to criminals, thieves, robbers will create stress on the people who do all these bad things. Recently in India, we saw many rape cases that ruin the girl's life and leads to death. I appreciate the action was taken by the government to encounter the 4 brutal criminals. There is a lifetime prison for the thief’s based on the robbery they did. By seeing these hope the criminals will reduce and stop doing the murders, rapes, and so on.
To sum up, altogether, Govt always does the audits whether they spent money wisely on the current issues in society. In my opinion Govt need to do alters in the punishments according to the severity of the crime level and spend money on this accordingly for the better society without crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nk the second method is more effective. According to me, the Government should allocate more mo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bureaus'' or 'bureau's'?
Suggestion: bureaus'; bureau's
...der cases will be handle by the central bureaus investigation team will handle. This wa...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun rape seems to be countable; consider using: 'many rapes'.
Suggestion: many rapes
...e bad things. Recently in India, we saw many rape cases that ruin the girls life and lead...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
...a, we saw many rape cases that ruin the girls life and leads to death. I appreciate t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88628762542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52010184333 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8888772396 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8947368421 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310206051546 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086429017681 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700094101338 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185233702677 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979638751359 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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