Dear Sir,
I am writing this regards to problems faced with public transport in your area recently. I have been using the public transport since about 10 years. I had never had any issue what so ever, but, recently we are facing lots of issue with the bus timings and seating allotment.
Initially, the society where i live was small and the public transport is the only mode of transport to the city. But now the population grown up 10 times it use to be. Due to that, the seating allotment in the bus is not sufficient and almost of time people standing on the bus for more than an hour to reach the designation. Also the number of buses to this region has been reduced which causes a huge riot in finding a seat.
About 3 months, the bus are not arriving on time as mentioned in the time table. The worst case is during the weekends the buses are late almost 30 minutes from the expected time. If this continues, it would really cause major problems for all the people in this society. Most of them are using public transport for work and study purpose.
I would really suggest to improve on the timings and also request to increase the number of transportation as this will definitely benefits the society.
I hope this will be taken into consideration.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Baron Fathoy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... public transport since about 10 years. I had never had any issue what so ever, b...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tment. Initially, the society where i live was small and the public transport...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...now the population grown up 10 times it use to be. Due to that, the seating allotme...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...now the population grown up 10 times it use to be. Due to that, the seating allotme...
^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... than an hour to reach the designation. Also the number of buses to this region has ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest improving'.
Suggestion: suggest improving
...k and study purpose. I would really suggest to improve on the timings and also request to incr...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... transportation as this will definitely benefits the society. I hope this will be ta...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63983050847 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43821600758 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.516559173 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194711923677 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724628613148 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941150943743 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948490241446 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919103552421 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.