A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties.
Dear Charles,
I am writing in regards to the agreement to take care of my house and dog. it's very kind of you and I appreciate it. Although I forgot to leave my mobile number with you while am away for vacation as to inform me of any arising situation. Meet the security personnel at my home for my contact number and keys to my apartment as he is aware of yo coming.
However, endeavour to go immediately because my dog is inside my apartment before he mess up everywhere. Also, I left an instruction on the dinning table on how to feed my dog. Please follow the instructions regularly as to avoid health problems.
While on rush to meet up with my flight, I forgot to do my laundry. Help me wash my clothes beneath the table at the left corner of my bedroom. Also clean my sitting room as my nephew's mess up the whole place when they visited.
Thanks for your understanding
Your's Sincerely,
Innocent ukeh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Charles, I am writing in regards to the agreement to take care of my house ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ement to take care of my house and dog. its very kind of you and I appreciate it. A...
^^^
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'messes'.
Suggestion: messes
...my dog is inside my apartment before he mess up everywhere. Also, I left an instruct...
^^^^
Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...table at the left corner of my bedroom. Also clean my sitting room as my nephews mes...
^^^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanks for your understanding Yours Sincerely, Innocent ukeh
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47928994083 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61131172332 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.6186495128 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8181818182 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120219842994 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571852725426 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711445773013 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103097285457 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925854001533 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.