There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to inform you about an issue I found in the changing room or sports centre. I have come to the front desk to raise awareness of the problems several times, yet it doesn't seems to be taken care of.
A few weeks ago, I noticed that there are several broken lockers in the facility. After a couple of day's observation, I have seen possible security fidelity. if the situation continues and is not being repaired, people's valuing properties may be stolen from the shattered lockers.
I was worried about these lockers and reached out to your staff to express my concerns. However, when I returned to the centre, the situation remained the same. Yesterday, I emphasized the circumstance with another assisting worker in the center. To my surprise, he seemed to be indifferent to my distress and telling me that to relax and mind my own business.
It's crucial to ensure safety and establish a trust relationship in the centre. Clients may be turned away if the facility's reputation is acclaimed to be a low-security level. I urge you to navigate into the situation and determine the necessary improvement for the facility.
Should you have any enquiries, you can reach out to me by phone at 293-239-4820. I would love to talk with you in person to share my observations as well.
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Eddie
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- There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit You have complained several times but with no success Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre In your letter Describe what the problem with the changing room is Say 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir or Madam, Im writing this letter to inform you about...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...s of the problems several times, yet it doesnt seems to be taken care of. A few we...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...I have seen possible security fidelity. if the situation continues and is not bein...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81742738589 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80192079569 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647302904564 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7955220139 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5625 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199920831014 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052936666051 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608168831675 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927122037264 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818210105826 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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