These days Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures Others argue that it is important to study at university Discuss both th

Nowadays, internet become more basic need of the students to learn various things. Learn in the sense of anything and study is also a part of this .courses which are internet based are more famous way to complete some of the students study.

Students find more convenient for this kind of courses as compare to university based courses. For pupils internet courses are time saving and pocket friendly too. They just need an internet go download the course material from online and according to their convenient time they use to study. By this they do not need to visit any university or attend their classes as well. Instead of that they get some extra time for their extra curriculum activities, like sports ,music, painting and lot more other stuff . And the main point they do not need to pay their courses fees too.

However, students rais their fees by them selves nowadays , they are more into earning to fulfill their personal interest. But today also there are group of people who still think university courses are more important than internet one, they believe due to compulsory attendance students connect to each other so well. They can get more social and ivolve better. It is good for their personal growth as a human being. A different cultures get connect by them they learn a lot from interactions on different level. The whole new world is constructing by just an idea of a study together under one roof. Students can celebrate different festivals together and can get more into it by sharing their own idea and perceptions whis is very important in today's world which is being unsesitive towards the humanity.

As per my opinion it is very much important today to get connect with each other not only just a learning purpose but on the emotional perspective too. In this fast growing world despite of having all the better communication devices still people feel alone . To avoid worst situation in the future students should be encourage by universities to join them before its get to late. Universities have to do something to attract students towards them by not just to make boring classes they should take initiative to make learning more sensible and fun together on one platform ,this way students will come forward for the study at university by their own .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 937.175257732 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 391.0 206.0 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85677749361 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 3.78020617076 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47232527084 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 127.690721649 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503836317136 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 290.88556701 205% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5826593613 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9473684211 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 82.0 2.54639175258 3220% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288999613347 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968717648598 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696274855856 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19912916443 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573965368397 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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