A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Hello John,
I hope you are enjoying your new apartment and I think you would have settled well there by now.
I want to remind you about one of my suitcases that you have borrowed from me two months ago for shifting your articles to your new house. The suitcase is a red American Tourister that has a hard plastic cover with the pictures of Mickey Mouse and Mini all over it.
I have planned a long trip to Disney along with my family in a month and so I am in need of that suitcase, as it has many compartments I can fit in most of my necessary items in that. Next reason is that my daughter is very much interested in that suitcase as it has Mickey's picture all over she wants to take that along with us for the trip and show off to people her likeness to that cartoon character.
I know that your place is quite far away from mine and it may not be possible for you to drive all the way along for that. I suggest you can either send that through any courier service or make arrangements to send through your friends, whom you said are planning to visit some places near my city.
I expect that you make some plan to send that suitcase sooner. Hope to meet you soon.
Your Buddy
Alex.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing to visit some places near my city. I expect that you make some plan to send ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16379310345 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12934524612 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0221836554 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145015062857 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598119343082 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405840496581 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090113354837 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244499459347 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.