While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people think that global warming is the most pressing issue in modern era. Whereas, other consider deforestation more destructive for the environment. However; I believe that both have adverse effects on our lives.
Global warming is a result of air and land pollution. Waste from factories and emission of smoke from industries and vehicles have affected environment badly. Depletion of ozone layer as a result of pollutants has increased temperature enormously. Firstly, soaring temperature has harmful effects on agriculture and crops. Moreover, fecund fields could turn into dry lands due to global warming. Secondly, it is causative factor towards floods and other natural disasters such as cyclone and hurricanes. Global warming creates imbalance in climate, hence, resulting extreme temperature across the globe. Furthermore, aquatic life is also endangered due to melting of ice bugs and fluctuation in temperature.
Some people think that deforestation is bigger threat than global warming. Ruthless cutting of trees for wood has resulted in immense shortage of woodlands globally. Additionally. Illegal tree cutting has brought many forests on verge of destruction. Temperature arises due to deforestation which forces terrestrial animals to migrate hence affecting wild life and other habitants. Furthermore, group of trees can be cutting down for mining and farming, which leads to environmental disasters like flood.
In conclusion, global warming and deforestation are equally disastrous. Both have resulting in soaring temperature and rapid climate change across the world. Creating awareness among the people is an effective way to cope with challenges occurs due to both factors on human lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75390625 4.54256449028 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97268448163 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0372312093 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5263157895 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246065875089 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728120309166 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684873626461 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175811827743 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115768626139 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 41.2886597938 213% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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