Dear Pooya
I hope this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bowl is broken . Honestly , today the weather was extremely hot in your apartment and air condition was out of the order.Therefore I had to open the window and suddenly a heavy wind blew and the bowl fell and broke.
Shamefully , I know that bowl was your family memento and that was very expensive . So I must apologize for troubling you with this matter.
Although I took care of your apartment , I was not a good trustee and please accept my apology.
Anyway I thought so much and I found a great solution. I talk about this matter with master of handicrafts in Isfahan and fortunately he said me bowl can be repaired. I am so sorry again and I am waiting for you to come back.
Yours sincerely
Farhood
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Dear Pooya
Dear Pooya
I hope this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bowl is broken. Honestly, today the weather was extremely hot in your apartment and air condition was out of the order. Therefore, I had to open the window and suddenly a heavy wind blew and the bowl fell and broke.
Shamefully, I know that bowl was your family memento and that was very expensive. So I must apologize for troubling you with this matter.
Although I took care of your apartment, I was not a good trustee and please accept my apology.
Anyway I thought so much and I found a great solution. I talk about this matter with master of handicrafts in Isfahan and fortunately he told me bowl can be repaired. I am so sorry again and I am waiting for you to come back.
Yours sincerely
Farhood
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Pooya I hope this letter finds you well. I dee...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret letting'.
Suggestion: regret letting
...pe this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bo...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...nfortunately your antique bowl is broken . Honestly , today the weather was extrem...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y your antique bowl is broken . Honestly , today the weather was extremely hot in ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... and air condition was out of the order.Therefore I had to open the window and suddenly a...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... and air condition was out of the order.Therefore I had to open the window and suddenly a...
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Suggestion: ,
...and the bowl fell and broke. Shamefully , I know that bowl was your family mement...
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Suggestion: .
...mily memento and that was very expensive . So I must apologize for troubling you w...
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Suggestion: ,
... Although I took care of your apartment , I was not a good trustee and please acc...
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Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...ndicrafts in Isfahan and fortunately he said me bowl can be repaired. I am so sorry ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for you to come back. Yours sincerely Farhood
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... come back. Yours sincerely Farhood
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, honestly, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5472972973 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63574601894 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7213298144 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2878282045 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111207474735 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624830521416 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159193028794 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820742904834 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.