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- While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter explain- what happened- apologize for the accident- tell your friend wha 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret letting'.
Suggestion: regret letting
...pe this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, honestly, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48322147651 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55652727724 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664429530201 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8888278019 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.7272727273 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289733590559 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104291541015 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603993194514 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159580179845 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740782637727 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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