Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
Suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir
I am writing to draw your attention to the road repair work being done in my community. I am sim and living in meadowlands street, Nepean. I am living in this area for the past 6 years.
For the past few days, there is work going on outside my house which is very loud and disturbing. the noise coming from heavy machines is not only causing problems for me as well as neighbors. There are some students living in this area and it is very difficult for them to study late-night with this noise outside and the final exam is coming on next month so it is a precious time for them.
I request you to please add some labor and complete this road maintenance as soon as possible. lastly, work should be done in the business hours so that residents can sleep or study at the night.
I hope issues will be resolved soon.
yours sincerely
sim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ouse which is very loud and disturbing. the noise coming from heavy machines is not...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...s road maintenance as soon as possible. lastly, work should be done in the business ho...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...I hope issues will be resolved soon. yours sincerely sim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36875 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30012737419 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.973013247 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1740589704 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692348246356 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411420273209 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888077660464 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454110406631 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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