A work colleague or student friend has applied for a new job and he she asked you to write a reference letter to the new employer Write a letter to the employer to recommend your colleague friend In your letter state your reason for writing and say how yo

Essay topics:

A work colleague (or student friend) has applied for a new job, and he/she asked you to write a reference letter to the new employer.

Write a letter to the employer to recommend your colleague/friend.

In your letter

* state your reason for writing and say how you know the applicant

* describe your colleague/friend's relevant qualifications and skills

* and explain why you are recommending this person for the job.

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am writing this letter to recommend my earlier colleague, Jason, for the new software engineer position in your company, Facebook.

Having worked closely with Jason for the past five years, I confidently believe that Jason will be a good fit for the role. I first got to know Jason when he was still an IT technician in our previous company, and I supervised his work and guided him throughout his career growth.

Even though starting as an IT technician, Jason was working hard to become a software engineer. He has worked extra hard, and taken a part-time course in Computer Science. After completing his degree, he continues to pursue a master's degree in order to broaden his horizons.

Given his ambition and determination to become a good software engineer, I believe he will be a good fit for your company, Facebook, where engineering principles are valued.

I hope my recommendations will help Jason’s application to your company.

Yours faithfully,

Truong Chau Thy

Votes
Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...rst got to know Jason when he was still an IT technician in our previous company, and...
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Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...er growth. Even though starting as an IT technician, Jason was working hard to b...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22754491018 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90849116884 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4865991945 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187648638602 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806019136389 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674212504489 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115072285985 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821678641815 0.0580467560999 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.