You brought a ticket to a music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell your friend the details about the concert
explain why you are unable to go
and explain how you friend can receive your ticket
Dear Jason,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to ask whether you are keen on going to Taylor Swift’s concert this coming Friday.
The concert will take place in Singapore National Stadium on January 1st. The first performance will start at exactly 8pm though all audiences are required to be present by 6pm. In addition, Katy Perry is going to be one of the guest singers in this concert, and I know that you will be thrilled to watch her live.
Despite the fact that it took me a lot of effort to buy this ticket, I am unable to join at the last minute due to my son’s school concert. He has made a great deal about how important this performance is to him, and I cannot make any valid excuse to be absent. Therefore, even though I am sadly unable to join, I would be happy to know that you will enjoy it as much as I do.
I will pass this ticket to your wife when I meet her at our yoga studio. I hope she will remember to pass to you.
I believe you will have a great time at the concert.
Best Regards,
Kathy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... am writing to ask whether you are keen on going to Taylor Swift's concert this com...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... she will remember to pass to you. I believe you will have a great time at t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29207920792 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2372075316 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3836626126 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197556527643 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742378405159 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048003909993 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123580243824 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355534886241 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.