write a letter to arrange accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
Iam Nadia a student from Egypt, going to visit UK soon in Manchester city to attend my short training course .However my accommodation has not been arranged, thus Iam seeking for your assistance to arrange it, since I will stay there for few months which is too long to stay in hotel.
I would like to ask for a small apartment, to stay in it while the studying period. It is preferred to be one bed room with small living, kitchen and bathroom. and if possible to be in small compound which have all the facilities special Gym and cinema in addition to be close from the collage .On the other hand I do not want the landlord rent to be more than 600$ per month, because I have other monthly expenses I should consider in my budget.
Kindly send me all the details of available properties types with full description and location. If you can provide me with photos it will be ideal option to judge and select the suitable one for me .Also the date for each to be occupied. Your assistance is highly appreciated.
I look forward very much to hearing from you soon.
Your faithful,
Nadia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, Iam Nadia a student from Egypt, going to visit UK...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...adam, Iam Nadia a student from Egypt, going to visit UK soon in Manchester cit...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... city to attend my short training course .However my accommodation has not been ar...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ity to attend my short training course .However my accommodation has not been arranged,...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ity to attend my short training course .However my accommodation has not been arranged,...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...l stay there for few months which is too long to stay in hotel. I would li...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there for few months which is too long to stay in hotel. I would like to ...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ith small living, kitchen and bathroom. and if possible to be in small compound whi...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f possible to be in small compound which have all the facilities special Gym and ...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in addition to be close from the collage .On the other hand I do not want the land...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: On
... addition to be close from the collage .On the other hand I do not want the landlo...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$600'.
Suggestion: $600
... want the landlord rent to be more than 600$ per month, because I have other monthly...
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Line 11, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...judge and select the suitable one for me .Also the date for each to be occupied. ...
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Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...dge and select the suitable one for me .Also the date for each to be occupied. Your...
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Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...dge and select the suitable one for me .Also the date for each to be occupied. Your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, thus, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59900990099 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46727428706 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9320754637 44.8134815571 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355664877483 0.216113520407 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00916527417522 0.0766984524023 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259233100829 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0212696621542 0.12726935374 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368401355109 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.