Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say
– Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.
– Suggest a future use for this building.
– Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is James and I am resident of 289/2 South Avenue Brampton. Recently, I came to know about the plans of planning council to demolish the 300 years old building, ''THE EMPIRE SQUARE''. I am writing this letter to raise my concern about this decision as I think this decision is taken in hurry and the importance and significance of this site is not considered before taking this type of decision.
Lets me explain you the reasons why this place is so important for your city. Firstly, it is one of the prestigious buildings from late 16th century. This building is a pride of our city. Apart from its historical importance this building represents the power, as in was the main commercial center of trade in ancient times. I would like to suggest you that in place of demolishing this site, you can renovate this old building into an Arts Gallery. As this building is having large corridors and big halls so they can be easily converted into galleries for showing arts such as paintings, sculptures, statues, handicraft and others antiques.
I hope this is the best solution to restore the glory of this site. The planning council can organize an fund raising event for this building so that the people like me who want to keep this building can come forward to donate money for its repairs. Once this site got converted into Arts Gallery, a ticket of nominal amount can be charged for the visitors so that the new Art Gallery can make some money for salaries of staff and further maintenance in future if required.
Hope you will consider my suggestions positively and take necessary steps in this direction.
Yours faithfully,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...site. The planning council can organize an fund raising event for this building so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, apart from, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80208333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56534724008 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5983119965 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28462596923 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951591109946 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056145747236 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156434280793 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630801086267 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.