Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Diva, a resident of the colony, SSR Colony for more than 8 years now. I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the work which you are about to start in a few days, demolishment of Golconda fort. This fort was built in the 1600s by the Mughals as they had ruled Hyderabad for more than 500 years, and it is one of the significant historical places for foreigners as well as to the residents. Furthermore, the design and material used to construct the building is unique, which can be inspirational to many architecture students.
This building has got a very huge garden so that visitors can enjoy and refresh themselves. Keeping this historical inheritance for the next generation should be the primary reason to restore. Additionally, this could be developed as a city landmark, as well.
Nowadays, local people are utilizing the garden area for practicing cricket and shuttle cork, and thus it can be used in the future by asking them to pay a small amount which could be useful for the maintenance in the future.
As a Citizen, I urge a considerate not to pull down the historic building.
Yours faithfully,
Diva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83168316832 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82960527515 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5496307547 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292320982863 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991353094709 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423790548573 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154314614317 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466729447744 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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