As the world is growing enormously, doing some kind of voluntary work to serve our community has become crucial. Many people argue that long term job seekers should do voluntary work to gain government benefits. This essay will discuss the potential causes for this trend.
In current scenario, getting a government job has been everyone's dearm due to the perks that are offered by them. But making these job seekers doing some voluntary work will boost their level of confidence.For an example, in some of the states there is specialised team known as disaster manangment team who are always available even on holidays in case of any emergency. This is a part of their official duty.
Moreover, many people are redily in search of addressing social issues and make their self satisfactory by providing their time and efforts. THese people will go in rural and semi urban areas to deliver their knowledge and resources. During the biggest earthquake in Gujarat, most of the government officials had been diverted to serve the affected areas and local people. Apperently, some of these workers who had given their productive contribution are rewarded with good career awards. These will boost their confidence and will inspire others as well to do such kind of noble work.
To sum up, if voluntary work is done naturally without any forceful burden, the outcome becomes even more rich and recognisable. Encouraging someone doing these type of work is really challenging though with better direction and driven force things becomes better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, well, as to, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60257869196 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.596000984 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191802212532 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710587743127 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101474840242 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133403379554 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100060403661 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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