The most important aspect that attracts everyone’s attention in the recent time is pollution. There are lot of renovations proposed. Some people claim that all cars that causes burning of fossil fuel should be replaced by electric cars. In my view, I firmly support this option. This essay will discuss the merits of using electric cars.
To begin with, it is human nature to spoil the things which we have got without any cost or labor. Our surrounding environment is one of them .But now the time has come where we have to act firmly to save our globe otherwise our next generation will not have perks of having natural environment. The statics have shown that currently 70% of cars that are used in United Nations only belong to very old manufacturing that require replacement as early as possible. Moreover, as the time passes the capacity of any car to burn fossil fuel effectively decreases. This puts extra burden as the availability of fuels is also diminishing in comparison to its demand.
On the other hand, due to advancement in the electric cars nowadays their efficiency, working capacity and availability has surged to great extent. The biggest concern with these type of cars was about its charging that has been solved by setting up charging stations at various locations. So now without any fear of getting stuck at any point, people can enjoy their long rides.
To save our globe holistic approach should be adopted. This essay has discussed necessary positive feedbacks of using electric cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.953125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6047834556 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2566253672 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221980278523 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726065064038 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111529831149 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131805743626 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619024949436 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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