Dear Sir/Madam,
I have come to know that you are looking for a coach for your football team to participate in upcoming inter college tournament.
Let me explain myself in detail. I am Jay Thomas currently managing a team at Algoma University since last 2 years. I have played as a goalkeeper for 13 years and after that I have started my career as a football coach. Since childhood, my inclination towards sports was higher especially towards football. After my graduation, I have decided to be a goalkeeper as I liked it most.
Besides that, under my guidance at Algoma University, We have taken part into 3 inter college tournaments. Among them, we have won twice. Moreover, we grabbed the best goalkeeper award too. My special skills are not only in giving them physical strength but also making them mentally stronger. As you know that this game is more about sustaining mental health for longer time. Also, I would like to train my players with cross training so that their mind open up in different directions.
My contract at this university is going to expire in next month. So if I get selected, I can join your team from next month only. I think that will be the perfect time to prepare our team for upcoming tournament.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Jay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76339285714 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68073944999 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4415774201 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7647058824 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1764705882 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146955411159 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047727536526 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419035240935 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977111295952 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425538776692 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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