Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter including:
What you bought?
What the problem is?
Why you want a refund?
To the management of Samsung,
I am a regular customer of your shop and buy useful items at regular intervals.Like always,this time I ordered a brand new movies DVD's which I received.To my shock,it was faulty so I am writing this letter to tell you the same and requesting you for the refund as well.
Last week,I ordered some DVDs from your company.I received them by courier.After opening,it came to my notice that DVD had a crack in it.When I raised this concern to your team immediately,they gave me plenty of excuses.I noticed they sent me the wrong one also.I rang again and asked them to change to the one I wanted.At last,they sent me other movies DVDs but not the one which I requested for.
This was really an unaccepted aapproach.I had to remind now and then and repeatedly they did the same thing.So now I don't want any further help but immediate refund instead.Also,I ask you to please let members of your team understand this mistake should not happen anymore in future.
Yours sincerely,
Vinod J.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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To the management of Samsung, I am a regular customer of your shop and...
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...d buy useful items at regular intervals.Like always,this time I ordered a brand new ...
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...l items at regular intervals.Like always,this time I ordered a brand new movies DVDs ...
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...s time I ordered a brand new movies DVDs which I received.To my shock,it was faul...
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...brand new movies DVDs which I received.To my shock,it was faulty so I am writing ...
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...ovies DVDs which I received.To my shock,it was faulty so I am writing this letter ...
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... you for the refund as well. Last week,I ordered some DVDs from your company.I r...
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...k,I ordered some DVDs from your company.I received them by courier.After opening,...
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...your company.I received them by courier.After opening,it came to my notice that DVD h...
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...I received them by courier.After opening,it came to my notice that DVD had a crack ...
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...to my notice that DVD had a crack in it.When I raised this concern to your team imme...
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...ed this concern to your team immediately,they gave me plenty of excuses.I noticed the...
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...ediately,they gave me plenty of excuses.I noticed they sent me the wrong one also...
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...es.I noticed they sent me the wrong one also.I rang again and asked them to change t...
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...noticed they sent me the wrong one also.I rang again and asked them to change to ...
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...sked them to change to the one I wanted.At last,they sent me other movies DVDs but...
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...em to change to the one I wanted.At last,they sent me other movies DVDs but not the o...
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...This was really an unaccepted aapproach.I had to remind now and then and repeated...
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... and repeatedly they did the same thing.So now I dont want any further help but im...
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...atedly they did the same thing.So now I dont want any further help but immediate ref...
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Suggestion: Also
...rther help but immediate refund instead.Also,I ask you to please let members of your...
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...r help but immediate refund instead.Also,I ask you to please let members of your t...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... this mistake should not happen anymore in future. Yours sincerely, Vinod J.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...en anymore in future. Yours sincerely, Vinod J.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7191011236 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82422832346 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 16.3608247423 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.031702536 44.8134815571 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.0 76.5299724578 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 16.8248392259 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194071626562 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106604846376 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552319214117 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951762397306 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719190497746 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 8.37731958763 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 7.45979381443 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 8.62886597938 336% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 8.54432989691 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.