Write a letter of complain to the manager of on line shopping site about a product that you brought and are not happy with
Give detail of your order
Example about the problem with the product
Say what you want to do about it
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the produc that I ordered from your prominent site "Snapdeal". Last week, I ordered a purse of Elegent company. My order number is Exo23546.
Yesterday, I received my order but when I opened the parcel it was not up to the mark. There are enormous points forcing me to complain about the quality of the product. Firstly, I ordered dark red colour but it was slightly different. Moreover, the company was not same. Infact, it has some scratches indicating it has been already used.
Given the situation, I would like to hear your explanation. Additionally, could you please replace the product or repay my money. You look in to the matter and take some proactive steps to solve this issue on the prior basis.
Yours faithfully
Rajat
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| 2018-03-08 | Urvashi ghai | 56 | view |
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...nt site 'Snapdeal'. Last week, I ordered a purse of Elegent company. My...
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... order number is Exo23546. Yesterday, I received my order but when I opened t...
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...r is Exo23546. Yesterday, I received my order but when I opened the parcel i...
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...d my order but when I opened the parcel it was not up to the mark. There are eno...
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...out the quality of the product. Firstly, I ordered dark red colour but it was sli...
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...ered dark red colour but it was slightly different. Moreover, the company was n...
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...ut it was slightly different. Moreover, the company was not same. Infact, it h...
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...ghtly different. Moreover, the company was not same. Infact, it has some scrat...
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...ver, the company was not same. Infact, it has some scratches indicating it has ...
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...n already used. Given the situation, I would like to hear your explanation. A...
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...on the prior basis. Yours faithfully Rajat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98561151079 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99776498357 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719424460432 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.685520703 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.75 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5833333333 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151446245307 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447349691565 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057459649612 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858730071754 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147804846731 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.