Write a letter to a friend to invite him for a vacation? Why u want to go on a vacation? Where your r planning to go? Why you want this friend to accompany you?
Dear Ali,
Hope you are enjoying good health. I still remember my last trip with you when we visit Swat and Kalam in March last year. Don't you want to have some fun again? This year I am planning to visit Hunza and Gilgit. If you have time then I want you to accompany me for this adventure.
It is always refreshing to visit nothern parts of Pakistan. As you know during our last tour we enjoyed alot, so I hope on we will enjoy much more on this tour. We will visit lot of sites like three cones views, Attabad Lake, Khunjrab Pass and lot more. A touring company is arranging this tour in feasible cost which both of us can afford.
I want you to go with me on this tour because there are many photography sites on the way. I know you are a very good photographer so I can make some memories with you on this tour.
I would like you to consider this tour with me.
Yours sincerely,
Amad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...isit Swat and Kalam in March last year. Dont you want to have some fun again? This y...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...some memories with you on this tour. I would like you to consider this tour wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20689655172 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11028347393 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1959456724 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3076923077 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3846153846 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220003584654 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917897752641 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799729492578 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146961562989 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791752965291 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.