You have joined a sports club recently. You are having some problems. Write to the manager and include these information
Explain why you joined the club
Tell you problems
Give solutions
Dear Sir,
I have joined your sports club recently. Main purpose for this is to look fitter and younger. Your club is one of the best club in the town with almost all the facilities. From a weight lifting rod to a treadmill every machinery is available in your club. That was the main thing which attracted me to join your club and I did.
I was quite happy as everything was going smooth till last Sunday when I was running on treadmill and it suddenly stopped. The instructor couldnot figure out what happened with it and now we donot have any running machine in the club.
Daily I tell the manager about this problem but he is not fixing it. I would like to request you either get a mechanic to repair the machine or order a new one so that we can continue our daily routine.
It will be very kind of you if you can rectify the problem as soon as possible.
Yours obediently,
Amjad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: your
Dear Sir, I have joined your your sports club recently. Main purpose for ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...and it suddenly stopped. The instructor couldnt figure out what happened with it and no...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re out what happened with it and now we dont have any running machine in the club. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3550295858 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25248793586 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2422724233 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269674291155 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892351368574 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780024167173 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151980849725 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759460242266 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.