Dear Rekha,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing you this letter to invite you to my home on a special occation of Laxmi Puja on this Diwali.
After this pandemic time of Corona virus, this is the first time in my house when we will celebrate this Puja. Here in India, Diwali is the biggest festival of Hindus and almost everyone celebrate it. On the day of Diwali, there is a party at my house to meet our relatives. We will worship Goddess Laxmi in the evening of Diwali and then fire the firecrackers.
Specially in Gujarat, we celebrate our Gujarati New Year on the day after Diwali and will go to our relatives house to give wishes and sweets to them. You are pursuing project on the Indian traditions and festivals, so this will be the best opportunity for you to have an experience of watching India's most famous celebration and become a part of it.
We also don't spend any time after finished our studies so we both will have grate memories. Please inform me about your schedule so that I can arrange accommodation for you.
I'm waiting for your reply.
with lots of love,
Unnati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50980392157 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39093105848 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8044697502 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0334868878099 0.216113520407 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139957209104 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276586844122 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0285524387189 0.12726935374 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275269510624 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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