Every country largely depends on the agricultural productions although the new generation of the world is trying to avoid to become a farmer in the present era. In this essay we will discuss the possible reasons and solutions of this situation.
In the most of countries, large number of people are well educated and use different types of gadgets like laptops and smart phones. So one of the possible reasons to avoid farming is that a big number of people thinks that the farming is the work of uneducated and backward people. So that some people feel ashamed of being farmer. The other possible reason is that the farming needs extra hard work and care and also there is no time boundary of work for the farmer. Somethimes a big farm needs a lot of people to take care of it but everyone can not afford many worker on pay for lots of days. It becomes very costly though the income could be very small in the comparison to the hard work and cost.
On the other hand, if no one carry the profession of farming who will grow the food for the nation would be the big question in the nearest future. To solve this question, here I am going to give some possible solution of this problem. The government should encourage thair people to carry this profession by showing a helping gesture to them through the different schemes which can be helpful to new farmers. The experts also should aware the farmers to use the new technology and equipments in farming to improve their work and get extra benefit form their crops. The use of different gadgets can motivate the youngsters to join the farming as a profession.
To summarise the essay, I would like to say that if some how we can develop the interest of the youngsters in the farming and the youngsters would be able to know the value of farming, they would definitely join the business of farming.
- Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it 87
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid becoming'.
Suggestion: avoid becoming
...ew generation of the world is trying to avoid to become a farmer in the present era. In this es...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...solutions of this situation. In the most of countries, large number of people are well educat...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work of uneducated and backward people. So that some people feel ashamed of being farme...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd work and cost. On the other hand, if no one carry the profession of farmin...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the nation would be the big question in the nearest future. To solve this questi...
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Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...mprove their work and get extra benefit form their crops. The use of different gadge...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and get extra benefit form their crops. The use of different gadgets can motivate t...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... profession. To summarise the essay, I would like to say that if some how we ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...the essay, I would like to say that if some how we can develop the interest of the youn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56586826347 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40589867883 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8664685483 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235750828624 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789775329096 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455894061622 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140939833058 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460092873253 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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