Dear Rita,
I hope you are in good health. I am writing this letter to inform you about the wonderful event which would you enjoy very much.
I have seen the advertisement of the animal show in my town next week. There will be the different animals and birds from various parts of the world will be showing as a digital presentation and video conference live from some forests and zoos of different countries. The lectures on the topic "the animals and their habitats" will be given by the experts of the university.
I know that you are interested in getting knowledge about animals and love to see various animals of the world. The best thing about this show is this is the charity show and all the money they will earn form this show will be donated for the welfare of the animals. I am sure you will love this show and never want to miss this opportunity. Even I am also excited to watch this show and I will enjoy more if you accompany me in this show.
Please come before the day of the show and we both will enjoy this event and make the memories for our lifetime. Please inform me your plan for coming so I can come to receive you.
I am waiting to hear from you.
Yours lovingly,
Asha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rita, I hope you are in good health. I am writ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent which would you enjoy very much. I have seen the advertisement of the anim...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to hear from you. Yours lovingly, Asha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41592920354 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30959888389 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7654350686 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7692307692 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187715907035 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827340126044 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680177183538 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120178983958 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845371854681 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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