Write a letter to friend inviting on family function. what is the occasion, what are your plans and why is it important that she should come.
Dear Shreya,
How have you been? Hope you are in the pink of your health. It’s been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to invite you to my sister’s wedding. I am sure you will like the rituals since you have always been fascinated by the diverse cultures of my country, India.
The functions will start 3 days prior to the wedding date which is November 11. There are many other pre-marital ceremonies that you will certainly enjoy. After the marriage gets over, we will visit the local tourist spots and can try the authentic local cuisines and can some adventurous sports.
I remember your hospitality when I visited your home and the way your parents treated me. Although that cannot be compared I want you to come over so that we can have lots of fun and you will remember this time forever.
Let me know the dates when are you planning to visit so that I can get the necessary arrangements done. Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Best wishes
Paul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58659217877 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38092405398 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.157257912 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1538461538 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075016162752 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293744309781 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406169685462 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455459743304 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250359300287 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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