One of the latest trends is that people tend to watch films at their spare time rather than do any other activities. There are few reasons of this kind of behavior and consequences of it as well. In this essay, I will discuss what is behind above-mentioned trend and why I believe that it is a negative development.
The main motive why it is popular to watch movies in a modern society is that it is convenient and rather entertaining. The idea of staying at home, ordering a delicious meal and relaxing in front of a TV set or a computer is very appealing for almost every one. Especially with appearance of the Internet, we can find huge amount of movies online and anyone can watch an interesting film at any time. For instance, when my sister and I wanted to do something joyful previous weekend, we ordered a pizza and decided to watch “Suits”. As a result, both of us have spent a great time and we will probably repeat it again.
However, there are number of problems stemming from the pasting time in front of a screen. First, described above trend leads to the isolation of a person and lack of communication. In addition, films are not a real life and it is inevitable that the most of people will feel frustrated by the fact that they spend their time without real interaction with real people. This is because human beings are social animals and we need to communicate with each other face to face. On top of all of this, watching movies is followed by different kinds of fast food, people consume it with lack of control, and the major consequence is our society becomes the society of overweight people.
In conclusion, the main cause of the recent trend is the convenience and availability of it. However, despite the fact that spending time at home watching films is rather comfortable there are some drawbacks of it. Therefore, it is advisable to spend less time in front of a screen and try to have more weekends that are active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...real life and it is inevitable that the most of people will feel frustrated by the fact that t...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to have more weekends that are active.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61253561254 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74972023228 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3447594256 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254468061653 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717201610703 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633371922923 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148226548745 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134011972859 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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