Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A considerable number of people assume that the countryside is more suitable for maintaining a healthy way of life. Meanwhile, some argue that there are health benefits in favor of city life. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own opinion on the matter.
On the one side are those who think that living in rural areas is the best for a healthy and active lifestyle. This is because the rural environment is considerably cleaner than in cities. For example, there is fresh air without pollutants from exhaust fumes as well as available organic fruits and vegetables in a village. Thus, a villager consumes many vitamins from veggies and breathes fresh air, which is highly beneficial for their health. Additionally, a person being a countryman has to do a lot of physical work that could be considered favorable for health.
On the contrary, there is better medical service in municipal areas rather than rural ones. Thus, city dwellers solve their health issues more effectively. For example, if a person has a serious disease or an emergency case, as a rule, they will not find adequate medical treatment in the village. In addition, there are plenty of different gyms and sports clubs in cities that provide a service for receiving enough physical activity. The truth is that today a modern citizen might be even more fit than a farmer or a villager.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, I believe that the countryside is more beneficial for human health. This is because, there are fewer factors causing diseases such as excessive air pollution, which increases the risk of stroke, lung cancer, heart, and respiratory diseases. Thus, it is recommended to improve the ecological situation in the cities as well as medical services in the countryside in order to provide an equivalent level of health for both, city dwellers and country ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97530864198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70716138338 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4225279939 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187313284829 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584571252834 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553918501652 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122104757909 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075741827795 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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