Dear Ron,
How are you? It's been quite a time since we met. But this letter could surprise you in a big way when you'll know that I've found job for you. Isn't it exciting?
Well, to be honest, when I heard about your financial problems, and your struggle to find a job to continue your studies, then started searching part time job for you immediately. Fortunately, after reading so many job commercials, I found one which would be very suitable for you; an assistant accountant job in a renowned non-banking company.
What's more, it will not only help you to pursue your education uninterrupted, but also provide you first-hand experience in accounts field. Apart from it, you can do your job duties in the evening shift which does not affect your college lectures.
Therefore to get this job you have to bring all your academic certificates. As you clear two stages of interview you will get an appointment letter. Should you need any other information, do not hesitate to call me.
Pay my regards to your parents. Hope to catch up with you soon.
Beat wishes,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you'll
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Suggestion: part-time
...ue your studies, then started searching part time job for you immediately. Fortunately, ...
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Suggestion: What's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s not affect your college lectures. Therefore to get this job you have to bring all y...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o bring all your academic certificates. As you clear two stages of interview you w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77659574468 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63305931534 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718085106383 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6362178407 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1428571429 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332195772656 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984615418003 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903756775452 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176500515594 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869285801072 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.