Write a letter to a friend. You borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
• Apologize for damaging the product
• Explain what happened
• Say how you are going to fix it
Hello Jude,
I’m sorry I haven’t returned the X-Box game you borrowed me three weeks ago. The battery got bad two days after I collected it.
I know you really warned me to ensure nothing happens to the game but I have failed you in that aspect. Please accept my sincere apology and hope you don’t hold it against me.
It happened on 7th of May when I and my colleagues were playing PES 2020. I didn’t know my sibling transferred the power surge arrestor connected to the game to another device. Consequently, the battery device got damaged as soon as there was an unusual voltage fluctuation due to the rain.
I am fortunate to have John, a game technician as my next door neighbor and I’ve given the game to him to repair. He specializes in battery components and has promised to get it fixed before weekend. In addition, this comes with a two year warranty period.
Be rest assured you will have your game in good condition along with an extra battery as a back-up come Thursday next week.
Cheers,
Azuka.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, may, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69945355191 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46895381229 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1066391718 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145168369619 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471606557798 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440487661554 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795343302996 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449829234231 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.