Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding the limited sports facilities in our King Street Town.
We have only one ground which is used by residents for playing football and cricket. However, many individuals in our town like to play other games such as basketball, badminton, tennis, and hockey. Plus, some people like to do swimming. Therefore, it is a humble request for you to consider building a new sports complex in our town.
The residents of our hometown have to daily travel 20 Kilometres to the city for playing their games as it has multiple sports complexes in different areas. Consequently, the homeowners from our town think twice before going to the city as it takes traveling and membership costs to enjoy their sports activities.
I would suggest you construct the big ground into a sports complex with indoor and outdoor facilities for the individuals of our place. Besides, the construction cost for building this complex can be taken from the taxes paid yearly by our town people which is ongoing for decades. Plus, the maintenance cost and staff wages will cover by the membership costs and some governmental funds.
I hope you will consider my request.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67247145286 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6147114579 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1791571795 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692570067279 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571017635123 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980587788378 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323504972246 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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