Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent you agree or disagree
It is an undeniable fact that the rising number of automobiles has increased the air pollution in the environment, majorly in cities. It is often argued that increasing the cost of petroleum will solve this problem. However, I partially agree with this notion as increasing fuel prices will eventually affect other things such as transportation costs.
Air pollution is one of the primary environmental problems in the city because of the rising number of cars and other vehicles on roads. People feel convenient and comfortable while computing to workplaces with their private automobiles. Due to this, there is heavy traffic congestion on the roads, especially in peak hours. With this effect, the quality of air in the city gets polluted. However, this can be sustained by other initiatives rather than focusing to increase fuel prices for individuals. For instance, the CM of New Delhi in India came up with an idea to run an odd-even system for citizens on roads while traveling with their private automobiles. This system was primarily focused on controlling the traffic on roads, which later on showed an effect on the air quality index.
Moreover, if the government will increase taxes on petrol, it will eventually increase the transportation cost of goods. As a result, the cost of goods will increase and middle-class man will find hard to run a family with necessities. For example, in India, increasing fuel prices have led to rising in poverty among Indians. According to a BBC survey, n India, yearly one percent of the population is dying due to hunger for the past few decades. Therefore, country leaders should take other initiatives for sustaining and solving the climatic conditions.
In conclusion, indubitably, transportation cost is directly proportional to the products which are inter exchanging within states or between countries. If the price of fuel will increase, similarly the transport taxes will increase. Hence, increasing fuel prices can solve the environmental problems by reducing the traffic on roads, but will increase the price of goods and other commodities that can lead to other problems in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
... proportional to the products which are inter exchanging within states or between cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84272026502 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 346.0 20.2975951904 1705% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1762.0 106.682146367 1652% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 346.0 20.7667163134 1666% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 130.0 7.06120827912 1841% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254921397918 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254921397918 0.084324248473 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171019424006 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265833517929 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 175.5 13.0946893788 1340% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -279.71 50.2224549098 -557% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 138.2 11.3001002004 1223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.81 8.58950901804 289% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 140.4 10.1190380762 1387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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