Write a letter to gym manager to recover your bag which you forget at gym yesterday. You came to know that gym will be closed for 1 week due to some renovation.
1) Introduce yourself
2) Explain what things you have inside it.
3) Why you need it so urgent
To,
The manager,
Fitness gym
Sub -Requisition for leftover personal bag
Dear John,
my name is calis & i am one of your tenants coming for regular gyming at your center. you can check id - 4578 which will provide complete information about me.
I would like to request for recovery of my bag which i forget at counter yesterday. it's red color leather handbag which has white strips at both surface periphery. it has also metallic ring having letter DG embarked on it. I came to know gym is closed for another one week which will be problematic for me. it has some important documents without which it be difficulty for me to manage. it is having collage id card, driving license & few agreement papers of my new hired flat which need to be presented to land owner tomorrow.
I request you to kindly keep this bag at security office at entrance wherein i will collect by showing my Identification proof. Looking for your kind consideration & support.
Yours Faithfully,
calis
id No. - 4578
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ming for regular gyming at your center. you can check id - 4578 which will provide ...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to request for recovery of my bag which i forget at counter yesterday. its red co...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ag which i forget at counter yesterday. its red color leather handbag which has whi...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...white strips at both surface periphery. it has also metallic ring having letter DG...
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Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...me important documents without which it be difficulty for me to manage. it is havi...
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Line 9, column 388, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hich it be difficulty for me to manage. it is having collage id card, driving lice...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o be presented to land owner tomorrow. I request you to kindly keep this bag at...
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Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at security office at entrance wherein i will collect by showing my Identificati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66543349826 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8913814508 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3636363636 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330914848613 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110272425709 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635805686395 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156644238899 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709007249601 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.